Wednesday, September 26, 2018

extra credit-

my reverse outline


thesis:
Using a literary lens, I’ll be analyzing the effectiveness of 21st century political propaganda by their conventions, rhetorics, and affordances/constraints.
Outline:
-why it is important to understand rhetorics in political campaigning)
-How barack used a smart slogan to appeal  to voters and proved his political poster is successful
-Political propaganda can be found outside of presidential elections
-Common era posters with an indirect audience and its effectiveness
Reflection
my initial organizational attempt was to point out the topics I would look at that prove a propaganda poster is effective, and how they're also different. political propaganda can be very different because its all about pushing a specific rhetoric, from a different side or argument. so introduced the opening paragraph after my introduction about things posters can all feature. then followed it with different examples that argue a different side from a different time period with different things happening within the time period, in term of politics. then i followed with constraints and what it could not do within its period. 
moving, forward i need to better analyze my argument and get examples that better line up with it. i don't necessarily have to point out what it can or can not do in different paragraphs. i can put them all in the same paragraph when analyzing different  examples, since i'm analyzing effectiveness then i can look at each one, how effective it was based off of the things i put in my thesis and compare those example's to the following examples. i truthfully also think my thesis isnt the best so that can use work.








Wednesday, September 5, 2018

WP1- nesting dolls

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number one of my three wb1 ideas is brand slogans
brand slogans > clothing brand slogans> athletic clothing brand slogans> nike slogans

Related imageImage result for nike slogan shirt

number two:
textual genres> satire> Horatian Satire> gulllivers travels
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number 3:

propaganda > political propaganda > p.p posters>  21st century propaganda posters


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Monday, September 3, 2018

PB1B: Plug'n Chug'n conventions

Conventions just keep popping up everywhere!

SCIgen: engineering papers
conventions
  • lengthy title
  • well structured
  • graphs
  • serious, professional tone
  • factual information
  • cited work
  • argumentative/ informative

Pandyland: 3-panel comics
these comics were a little weird and this is the most.
  • adult audience
  • passive aggressive tone
  • short and simple
  • dry humor
  • color ful
  • speech bubbles
  • hand written textual effect and design

memegenerator: popular memes

so doge - such meme much wowWilly Wonka - Oh age is just a number? well jail must just be a roomKermit The Frog Drinking Tea - #healthy yet all your pics be #fastfood but that's none of my business





a "meme" is kind of hard to define but its: a humorous image, video, piece of text, etc., that is copied (often with slight variations) and spread rapidly by Internet users.





conventions:

  • short, bold lettered, sentence or phrase over a humerous photo
  • photo matches the attitude/mood of text or vice versa
  • funny
  • age group varies
  • photo follow the trends/ symbols of generation (i.e from kermit came the term "tea")
  • can be contradictory (bottom right)



poem generator: self explanatory
i suck at poetry so i found a website that generates them for me based on some generic poem conventions.
1."Desolation is a misty breeze.
Never desire a cloud."
2. "The driver stops like a fast guy.
Dark, rainy sidewalks calmly buy a dead, faceless corner.
Lights stop like fast hoods.
Never get a flower.
The rainy driver roughly desires the slum."
conventions:


  • specific terms (i.e screenshot)
  • poems can be longer or shorter
  • structured in stanzas
  • rhyming scheme (aba, abb, abc)
  • tone varies but usually reference an emotion/feeling
  • imagery, yet can be vague
  • poems can be about anything or anyone or any event




these are all very different pieces of work which at first glance are very different. we go from a genre with more serious conventions and a formal tone like a science engineering paper, to a comic strip with heavy satire. meme and poems are totally different too in term of conventions, asides that they both feature a verbal communication intended to get a reaction. memes make you laugh. poems can make you feel a range of emotions. poems and the science essays are both structured pieces. cartoon strips and memes are both humorous in their own way, regardless of how their humorous traits are executed to the audience. 
ultimately to be behind one of these websites, you basically do the same thing i did, which is to take conventions from each genre and apply it. it is using a combination of these genres to create something users would want and is acceptable for that particular genre.


-now thats the tea,
raz



Wednesday, August 29, 2018

PB1A: perfect social media bios--EVERYTIME

Social Media Bios

Image result for social media

the hardest part in making your social media profile is not the username... its the bio. the bio can make or break your page. what will you write? should you even use words? what about just emojis? short and sweet? or sassy and structured? here are three examples of social media bios

Conventions:
  • short
  • funny
  • straight to the point
  • creative/unoriginal
  • slight emoji use 
  • informal/formal
  • differs person to person
  • is on your social media profile  (i.e instagram, or twitter)
Rhetoric:
  • audience- any other user within that social media app, potential custemors, followers, 
  • purpose- to reel people in; to inform users of who you are/ what you do; to entertain; to sell

Examples of Good Social Media Bio's:





Some of the conventions that apply to the acount bio's:


my personal profile:

  • appeals to people my age/friends/ family
  • descriptive
  • short and simple
  • informative
Ruby Rose ( celebrity)
  • appeals to fans/friends
  • bio is lengthy, but creative
  • descriptive
  • informal
  • informs of her latest career moves
Kim kardashian (influencer/celebrity):
  • appeals to potential customers/fans
  • straight to the point
  • simple

Thursday, August 23, 2018

annotating 101 - learn from the pros




if you saw my annotations in person, they look like chicken scratch. thanks technology.


raz (yours truly): 
  • uses underlining of certain pieces of text that she really agrees with, and makes her think
  • dashes to draw her attention to key facts of his argument
  • stars and circles for things she likes and didn't understand, respectively.
Quite honestly i annotate as if i am thinking on paper, and very random. 

keymerz:
  • underline and circle
  • sad or smiley faces
  • looked for facts she didn't agree with or didn't know
raet: 
* he is basic he highlights, bc he knows if he refers to it he will know what he was thinking
* highlights new words that are unclear or ?
* new facts
* talked about the authors recommendations

if the text is easy to read, or maybe if it isn't, annotation at my free will is useful. i can get through the reading in one go and not have to waste my time re-reading if i annotate correctly. 
i did not annotate in high school, but i should have, it makes english class easier.








PB3

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